an open letter to the haters
Road to the hash making dat cash while your smoking on ash I'm on a dash and your dad gives you a lash see your a wasteman looking like chamberlain and homer simpson I be making dat million billion trillion and in prison you pick up that soap making hope I deal that dope you can't cope and I got your girl pregnent it was my birthday present you are incessant and a peasant your girl was on my wood she was quite good your lacking fatherhood it's more like widowhood Road to the hash making dat cash while your smoking on Ash I be making my cache your nothing but trash I be making racks too busy tax your to busy eating snacks and big macks I be smoking my packs you be living in the shack I don't usually swear but fuck it fuck shit dick cunt your nothing but but a runt dick wank bitch your nothing but a snitch shit slut fuck you look like a fucking duck keep in mind I'm a kid on the grid pay your bid now this is your death take your last breath ay shout out to the haters raters gaiters debaters educators traitors mediators negotiators
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Hey @jdoginc, We're gonna review your track 'an open letter to the haters'. Let's get it! Love the rhyming here, you've got so many of them. Great bars too! You've got a lot of potential, if you listen to a bit of Biggie and practice mixing up your rhyme scheme and flows you're gonna be world class! Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! π§ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Great hype portrayed in this track, can really feel the energy! π₯΅ Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯