Hey @blackboy.toyd,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Better daysโ๐ฟ', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ
Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. ๐ง
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! ๐ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! ๐
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ
Great positivity, listeners like to feel good about themselves. ๐
If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX.
This song just screams positivity, we really like it and defo see better days ahead after listening to this!
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @blackboy.toyd, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Better daysโ๐ฟ', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. ๐ง The lyrics are fire, nicely done! ๐ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! ๐ Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ Great positivity, listeners like to feel good about themselves. ๐ If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. This song just screams positivity, we really like it and defo see better days ahead after listening to this! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
yoh you kill me
Yo, you're a living rap legend for real! ๐ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ