Yo @joeymccann,
It's time for us to take a look at 'passion '! 💥
Lit bars, keep 'em comin. 🙌 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'!
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
Perfect! hmm please check my new stuff "Post Ngong". l will be very happy if you hit that like button. l appreciate the love and support.
Bars: 10/10
Delivery: 10/10
Impression: 10/10
Bars: Perfect 💯
Delivery: Perfect 💯
Impression: Perfect 💯
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Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @joeymccann, It's time for us to take a look at 'passion '! 💥 Lit bars, keep 'em comin. 🙌 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
passion Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Perfect! hmm please check my new stuff "Post Ngong". l will be very happy if you hit that like button. l appreciate the love and support. Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥