f*ck my life
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yeah yeah fuck, my life is a shit nobody like me i don't no why but it's like this one day, it's gonna be one day somebody will like me maybe for the cash maybe not but i'm poor My dream is to be a good person i have difficulties at school but it's what it is sometime i ask my friends for help because they are all good My life is a god damn trash knock knock at the door it's my parents they ask me if i'am ok and i said no
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
here are my scores -1/10 bars -2/10 delivery and -3/10 impression...๐what's happening when guys talk some dust and people start giving it high marks???
Hi there @yts_k_y_123, Here's some feedback on your track 'f*ck my life', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐ Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ Try our Masterclass feature, to help progress your sound! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
CHECC MY SHIT OUT WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE ๐ฏ Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ