exPenDaBaLE viSioNaIR
just cause live with you treat me expendable do not have ta deal wit you your not the dependable just like the typical paint ah perfect picture visual im one of them men that are spiritual master of the ceremony stick to ritual i am hip.hop you.are hipacritical it is the princal if you dont stand for sumn you fall for anything i dont fall off the flow i brang the plenty pain what my name fire fox i got that flame whoof came with the truth shaken the booth cant relate to excuse pointing ya fingers at strangers accuse we are not the same heres sumn proof i put you to shame im dropping jewel hitler proof in the pudding and im caught up in the mixture you will certainly address me as mister and take its easy see he got a temper im smoken on a loud and you are blow wisper you say you hear me out but i am a listener
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ