Yo @wayneramalepa,
It's time for us to take a look at 'What It Do'! 💥
Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Try some different rhyme schemes to bring out the best in your track.
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶
Good choice of beat here! 🎼
The voices are coming across a little distorted, especially when you have two going at the same time. Would be great if you could clean up the recording quality.
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Yo @wayneramalepa, It's time for us to take a look at 'What It Do'! 💥 Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Try some different rhyme schemes to bring out the best in your track. Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The voices are coming across a little distorted, especially when you have two going at the same time. Would be great if you could clean up the recording quality. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
what it do, man¿ Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥