Death love
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gone are the days when girls used to love my heart is going down Dame from above I say what kind of love do I have what kind of love do have yeah yeah what kind of love do I have so much sadness in my hopeless life I never knew that things will change so fast you are not here and am alone trying to run away from dis pain that have grown I feel so empty now that you are gone there so much crying and I feel like dying I will never love again I think love is just a game look at me now am in big shame I wish it never came and I thought she felt the same dame
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gone are the days when girls used to love my heart is going down Dame from above I say what kind of love do I have what kind of love do have yeah yeah what kind of love do I have so much sadness in my hopeless life I never knew that things will change so fast you are not here and am alone trying to run away from dis pain that have grown I feel so empty now that you are gone there so much crying and I feel like dying I will never love again I think love is just a game look at me now am in big shame I wish it never came and I thought she felt the same dame
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Hi there @peterjaywise, Here's some feedback on your track 'Death love', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. ✅ This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 Honestly, you hit some really good flows in this track and your voice has a great naturaI tone to it. The timing of the backing voices shows you know what you doing, if you spend a bit longer on the lyrics you'll create some seriously good tracks! Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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