Hey @vicious427wicked,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'whipper๐ฆ%mouf-1๐'! ๐ฅ
The vocals are drownin' out the beat a lil' here, could you turn 'em down a bit?
The rhyming here is a bit off, try and work on this to give your track that extra boost.
Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars.
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @vicious427wicked, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'whipper๐ฆ%mouf-1๐'! ๐ฅ The vocals are drownin' out the beat a lil' here, could you turn 'em down a bit? The rhyming here is a bit off, try and work on this to give your track that extra boost. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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