16

Name: 16
Description: song describes my life at 16, and how I perceive the world. rough draft, but got more heat coming

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song describes my life at 16, and how I perceive the world. rough draft, but got more heat coming

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RY hill

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5 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Yo @ryhill! Waddup. Let's take a look at '16'! 💥 Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

👑 GODFLOW603 👑

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Dangles🇯🇲 Sykotic🎤The legendary

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Lil Joiner2.0

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

🤞🏾👑〽️Queen

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯