16
song describes my life at 16, and how I perceive the world. rough draft, but got more heat coming
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Yo @ryhill! Waddup. Let's take a look at '16'! ๐ฅ Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. This beat choice is great for you! ๐ผ Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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