16

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16 Oct 2021

song describes my life at 16, and how I perceive the world. rough draft, but got more heat coming

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2 years ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

3 years ago

Yo @ryhill! Waddup. Let's take a look at '16'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. This beat choice is great for you! ๐ŸŽผ Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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