ON MY LIT SHIT

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ON MY LIT SHIT

#1085va #marleymarko #3BG #1085MG #๐Ÿ”ฅshit @va_carleon

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5 years ago

#1085va #marleymarko #3BG #1085MG #๐Ÿ”ฅshit @va_carleon

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4 years ago

Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

This hard yo ๐Ÿ†•๐Ÿ’ฟ๐Ÿ†™Swing thru my way

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5 years ago

Hey @bmpbandit, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'ON MY LIT SHIT'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Your rhyming is tight. โœจ Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. However, to take your tracks to the next level try switching up the flows a lil' more. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ŸŽผ Great hype portrayed in this track, you really are on your "Lit Sh*t"! ๐Ÿฅต There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ŸคŸ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐Ÿ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

5 years ago

Ayyyye this really fucken dope

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5 years ago

coverart always i have the art 4 this

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4 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ hard

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2 months ago

Rhymes so rich, they're gold in the hip-hop vault! ๐Ÿ’Ž Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

6 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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