Hey @bmpbandit,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'ON MY LIT SHIT'! ๐ฅ
Your rhyming is tight. โจ
Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. However, to take your tracks to the next level try switching up the flows a lil' more.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ
Great hype portrayed in this track, you really are on your "Lit Sh*t"! ๐ฅต
There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ค
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
This nice love the flow ๐ฏ๐ฅ
This hard yo ๐๐ฟ๐Swing thru my way
Hey @bmpbandit, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'ON MY LIT SHIT'! ๐ฅ Your rhyming is tight. โจ Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. However, to take your tracks to the next level try switching up the flows a lil' more. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ Great hype portrayed in this track, you really are on your "Lit Sh*t"! ๐ฅต There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ค It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Ayyyye this really fucken dope
coverart always i have the art 4 this
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Rhymes so rich, they're gold in the hip-hop vault! ๐ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ