broken dreams
Steven Kidwell5 Plays
•12 Oct 2021
power wont heal heal the emptynes inside the lonely mind of a hart broken child who grew up in poverty bangin colors bendin corners liven on da edge tryin to saport his lil sister younger brother. mom crak chasen dady in a casket family fake and treat um like out cast police harasin cause the swag he like resemble ganster fashion school targets his action for profit more than knoldge sellin every thang moving out. that back pack to any habit haven soul who aproch with greenbacks gun blast and beats startin to sound one in the same yet the yupis swear its a shame wile closet casein cocaine and love is distant future is what us hoodloms chasen never thought about bein hungry and cold when i was hear lookin apon 4 years old and runin from the shadows in my room then them shadows became the only ones i could turn to never new id become one of them shadows stumbelin threw hi and disappointed life ant all its meant to be when you profit from murder hide outs become crak houses and home. seems to be allys and nighboers choches these real statements of the child who never had a chance gave failer feed homlesnes as his breakfest death for my lali biys hate will mount ta many men baby break this off im so damn lost y we waiten hear. lets get lost hold me tight i hope ta hear your voice in my last thoughts as i drift off boss...
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yes im workin hard and its a dream chase i have to succeed for my family not millions just surviveable is my goal although millions are altament at the peak and prime im aprrcative of your review sytay with me im goin to be droping large number of pain power and life reality .love svk da boss MURRGOTTI BODI SQUAD
Hey @stevenkidwell.1146, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on ' broken dreams'! 💥 The recording quality on the vocals it great! Whatever your setup, keep it like that! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Nice choice of beat, this is sounding nice with your delivery style. 🎼 Solid mix, the recording quality is great! ✔ We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
power wont heal heal the emptynes inside the lonely mind of a hart broken child who grew up in poverty bangin colors bendin corners liven on da edge tryin to saport his lil sister younger brother. mom crak chasen dady in a casket family fake and treat um like out cast police harasin cause the swag he like resemble ganster fashion school targets his action for profit more than knoldge sellin every thang moving out. that back pack to any habit haven soul who aproch with greenbacks gun blast and beats startin to sound one in the same yet the yupis swear its a shame wile closet casein cocaine and love is distant future is what us hoodloms chasen never thought about bein hungry and cold when i was hear lookin apon 4 years old and runin from the shadows in my room then them shadows became the only ones i could turn to never new id become one of them shadows stumbelin threw hi and disappointed life ant all its meant to be when you profit from murder hide outs become crak houses and home. seems to be allys and nighboers choches these real statements of the child who never had a chance gave failer feed homlesnes as his breakfest death for my lali biys hate will mount ta many men baby break this off im so damn lost y we waiten hear. lets get lost hold me tight i hope ta hear your voice in my last thoughts as i drift off boss...
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