Yo @empa7876k,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Bonnie and Clyde '! 💥
Your vocals are just a bit quiet compared to the beat, try turning them up for a more balanced mix! Also, try to put some energy into your delivery.
Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼
The effects don't really compliment this track, try to find the right ones for the mood.
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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we should collab on this beat , I have a song on this beat and I'm looking for a partner for it, my version is about relationships too
Strong Bars 💪 cool Bars: Can improve 👏
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
,dope brother stop by my #markx
can you check our #restinpest Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
this is named after a Eminem song-
Yo @empa7876k, It's time for us to take a look at 'Bonnie and Clyde '! 💥 Your vocals are just a bit quiet compared to the beat, try turning them up for a more balanced mix! Also, try to put some energy into your delivery. Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The effects don't really compliment this track, try to find the right ones for the mood. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯