Yo @joekieran,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Convicted felon '! 💥
Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧
Your rhyme scheme here is a bit off, try adding some more structure.
Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow.
This beat choice is great for you! 🎼
If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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I can't belive its been a month
Yo @joekieran, It's time for us to take a look at 'Convicted felon '! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Your rhyme scheme here is a bit off, try adding some more structure. Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
bro this shit fire