Heart of Fleshy Things

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Show me your face let me hear your voice Your voice is sweet and your face is my first choice We had a good thing going Heart for Jehovah glowing You were my desire Burn for you like wildfire Making me cry inside I tear up Rip off my bandage I’m torn up Was I born to give then go oh no Guard my heart I pick you let's roll Missing the view of your side profile Looking at you sideways with a wide smile Work of art is an understatement Wrote me off left me down in the basement Drew you a picture more like a love note Crumble like cookies gooier than the book I wrote Open up for me my fire is third degree When I’m not with you my head hangs This pains my heart of fleshy things Fumble the ball like the way I lost touch Eat my words cause I talk foolish too much Jump off the trampoline told me to bounce and take off My flight gate was A1 got my hardness turned soft Kid jumped up to me I already know Lifted up my spirits like angelic snow Your gift is what I want to see my light gleam My energy drink cause you rev up my real dream Many waters cannot quench love rivers cannot sweep it away I would die a richer man right now knowing my heart wasn’t broke today Children are precious because they live by innocence If I could have my childhood back I would take the death sentence Instead I’ll put all I have into loving you Your smile and laughter give me a w

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A Sizzle

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5 years ago

☆jaySpeakS

4 years ago

This is dope hommie just need small work definitely need your ears #Soalivee 👆🏻🔥👆🏻 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Goon above moon

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

What's up @asizzle23, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Heart of Fleshy Things'! 💥 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. 👍 Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 Sometimes you're on beat and other times you miss it a lil! Have a listen back and correct those bits where you're off to massively level up your song! 💯 Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 This beat is definitely one of those emotive one! 🥁 We love the clarity of your bars on this one! 🌟 This is definitely a solid mix, the recording quality is great! ✔ Love the regal frame you got going on the track artwork as well! Pretty cool! 🖼 Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lord-Plourde

4 years ago

great work with the music I definitely feel like you came in very creative with this project keep working on the Rhythm and concept and please support some of my music as well Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

ᵂ𝙂ᴬ𝝤ⱽ𝘿ᴱ ❦ 𝘿𝙐𝙍𝙊

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

O.Lo.Da.Don

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Jay j

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Yt Yanga

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥