1,2,3 to the 4
its ARV at your motherfucking door.
im about to share a fact,
Carmenita you know i always got your back,
when it comes to that
you know i never lack.
your brother already know
your brother already know
your brother already know,
that i got feelings for you tho.
Hey @ashleyviljoen,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'ARV-Got feelings for you tho'! ๐ฅ
Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit?
The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this.
The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ
Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects.
This is that laidback, wavy! Just try clean up the recording a bit!
Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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1,2,3 to the 4 its ARV at your motherfucking door. im about to share a fact, Carmenita you know i always got your back, when it comes to that you know i never lack. your brother already know your brother already know your brother already know, that i got feelings for you tho.
Hey @ashleyviljoen, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'ARV-Got feelings for you tho'! ๐ฅ Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. This is that laidback, wavy! Just try clean up the recording a bit! Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
correct Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
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๐ฅ #matchwick subscribe to the YouTube channel support the movement from UK Gloucester ๐ฌ๐ง Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ