Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @crackeddyl, Thank you for sharing 'First Song' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

CrackedDyl

3 years ago

Lyrics I’m Back on the track and you know what I’m sayin I am a player but I am not playin Chopper on my hip we’ve already been spraying Put on the floor yea you know that we Lay him Down They gimme the crown I’m lookin around I’m trippin You up and you down Damn I’m joking Feel like a clown Sinking I Naturally drown Get sent up to heaven At the age of 7 God can you just answer this one only question I’m feelin like this is the Greatest Depression... Because... In this expression or session I’m feelin a possession this lesson I’m showin aggression If I pulled out my weapon I would make a confession Sending me into the heavens I’m making regression There’s so much compression I’ve really been stressin There’s no progression so Switching to a sport On a field or a court They said I’m pretty short I should probably escort To a resort A hotel A motel What goes well Oh well I should probably lay back in the seat Step out Footprints over the street My job isn’t complete Off the street Stepping on the concrete But now on a wall This is where they make a fall And I go straight up to the top and I getin all the calls Like lebron or Brady No Bentley Just driving Mercedes My favorite drip It came from the 80s Like a Greek god Yea they callin me Hades Guess what Now everyone hate me Yea this girl she just really play me