am looking for the mercy of God
just a freestyle I don't write song๐ค๐ง hope you drop comment for me to improve plz๐๐๐๐
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Hey @hiway, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'am looking for the mercy of God'! ๐ฅ Perfect balance of vocal and beat volume, keep doing this! โ This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! ๐ We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ผ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
just a freestyle I don't write song๐ค๐ง hope you drop comment for me to improve plz๐๐๐๐
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