Forward

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I download the app Just to see what I could do with it, I upload a beat Now I really found some use with it, Explored through my thoughts Now my bars made a ruler fit, Brighter than ever What I saw like a solar eclipse, Listen to the flow Never thought that I had it, Practice makes perfect Came here like magic, Cleaner than ever So far from a static, This should get me forward Instead of being in a tragic.

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Icz Boy

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5 years ago

Bo Jangles

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @emmanuelovili, We're gonna review your track 'Forward'. Let's get it! Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Love the "static" rhyme scheme, keep it up. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

ᵂ𝙂ᴬ𝝤ⱽ𝘿ᴱ ❦ 𝘿𝙐𝙍𝙊

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Randythesavage

5 years ago

keep it up. 😎I know it's hard to record sometimes with this app and non-proffessional equip to have your lines heard. dont stop!

Ziplok

5 years ago

🏆🔥🔥🔥🔥 Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Brian Engram

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯