What's up @clendonbrown,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'girl i be your diary'! 💥
Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! The spiderman bar was pretty hilarious.
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows!
This beat choice is perfect for this track, great choice! 🧨
To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer!
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
#4kSWYPEZ Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
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thanks and i will keep working on it
What's up @clendonbrown, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'girl i be your diary'! 💥 Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! The spiderman bar was pretty hilarious. This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! This beat choice is perfect for this track, great choice! 🧨 To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥