Hey @LindaGillock!
Thanks for sharing 'suicide ' with us!
The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! This track really makes the listener feel something.
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way.
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be there.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Welcome to the rap scene, you're making waves! 🌊🎤 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
good Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @LindaGillock! Thanks for sharing 'suicide ' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! This track really makes the listener feel something. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥