Hi @shermanbrandon!
Welcome to our feedback of 'sherm an Alizay'!
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track.
Try improving your recording quality if you can.
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
๐๐๐ฒ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hi @shermanbrandon! Welcome to our feedback of 'sherm an Alizay'! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Jus playing around with these beats but aye we went in tho
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
WAKE EM UP ๐ฃ๏ธ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ