Yeah, I see a beautiful love, in sky. 
It’s shine like a morning star, 
I'm not rude, don't call me a gangster. 
Get out of here, with ur nasty ass
I'm praud to be in this world 
Because my dreams are big
Don't forsake me lord 
I will never steel
Show me the love 
That you have for me!!!

Yo @diamondgold!

Waddup - let's take a look at 'dream '!
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 
Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. 
The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 

Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!

All the best,
The Rap Fame Team

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