In a truth

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In a truth

Can you imagine life.. Change it for good that doesn't mean money and wealth what we think should be destiny thats false what i see is to keep this Earth steadily healthy for the future C it is that wrong or im asking too much is that selfish are we just blind as fuck everybody thinks it's conspiracy Blinded by reality killing everything off Cause we want to stay lazy It's crazy don't tell me relax just thinkyocoincidence with facts you see that's too much Of a coincidence At this instant every moment We'd be killing this likenwe dont give a fuk the only way that's not it gotta hit the brakes making a abrupt stop and change quick Cause this is all we got what the hypnotized by a spell that The devil institutionalized in our brain cell well that's how you want to see it that's I see it I hate to say we living forr greed we wrong you see we're not fucking meant to be here we're bacteriWe have the wrong bel What what it's all about fuck the rich fuck the power I could tell them to their face they could put me down death would fucking shower and I would curse that evil Sis evil sight with the good bad and me That tortured their days for eternity The hell

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5 years ago

See track description โ†‘

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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Great ๐ŸŽ‰

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5 years ago

Honestly I got a very raspy Voice and a East Coast New york Is Jersey accent

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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5 years ago

That's good advice thank you

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5 years ago

Yo @mikedesposito! Waddup - let's take a look at 'In a truth'! Fire beat, it makes the track even more dope. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try practising effects more to see how they work best. Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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1 month ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

6 months ago

Tag This โญ Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Great ๐ŸŽ‰

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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