Woke up in a nightmare so was i there rubber duck i was buck 50 short then hyperventilate hypertension my mission take my world take my world let me go let me go i was naked in the eye fly by fly by toch back game i am insane this was my wickiness my bliss then the shotgun went off and my mind blew in heaven soon now i know the truth punched me from my gum to tooth loose noose truth 50 times Armageddon then end my friend voices in my head channel the energy see me naked again smoking fate hells gate into the void open the mode now i see the truth lifes little noose noise in my heart this is my statement of art breaking my bones girl phones and my tormenting action dreams me into the Armageddon diabolical truth spit my tooth and its over
Hi @jessicamatthews!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Hell's Gate'!
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together.
Your style may sound better over a different kind of beat.
We like the rhyming, it's tight. We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Nice flow here - delivery is so important.
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Woke up in a nightmare so was i there rubber duck i was buck 50 short then hyperventilate hypertension my mission take my world take my world let me go let me go i was naked in the eye fly by fly by toch back game i am insane this was my wickiness my bliss then the shotgun went off and my mind blew in heaven soon now i know the truth punched me from my gum to tooth loose noose truth 50 times Armageddon then end my friend voices in my head channel the energy see me naked again smoking fate hells gate into the void open the mode now i see the truth lifes little noose noise in my heart this is my statement of art breaking my bones girl phones and my tormenting action dreams me into the Armageddon diabolical truth spit my tooth and its over
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Hi @jessicamatthews! Welcome to our feedback of 'Hell's Gate'! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Your style may sound better over a different kind of beat. We like the rhyming, it's tight. We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Nice flow here - delivery is so important. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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