Hi @dwaynesmith.2809!
Welcome to our feedback of 'put down the gun'!
Good choice of beat!
Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential!
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @dwaynesmith.2809! Welcome to our feedback of 'put down the gun'! Good choice of beat! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯