Damage (13:28)

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Bout ask my crush for her number but my friend went out of state but we still communicate Wish we had more but it was time to leave but I miss my crush and I don’t see her much We had her singing voice was perfect and even a expert had check it check out @lilton124 Then my homie Louis went to geogia For with ideas and I would never exclude him for ever its like a person that you keep forever and the people that you see forever And that did damage

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Lilbro Alex

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5 years ago

Bout ask my crush for her number but my friend went out of state but we still communicate Wish we had more but it was time to leave but I miss my crush and I don’t see her much We had her singing voice was perfect and even a expert had check it Then my homie Louis went to geogia For with ideas and I would never exclude him for ever its like a person that you keep forever and the people that you see forever And that did damage

ᵂ𝙂ᴬ𝝤ⱽ𝘿ᴱ ❦ 𝘿𝙐𝙍𝙊

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @lbalex! Thanks for sharing 'Damage (13:28)' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Your timing is great, nicely done. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Lilbro Alex

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5 years ago

@rheal_musick you have bad taste in music every body said 10/10

KIMJOSH

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Derrius Williams

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

TMBeatZ

5 years ago