not a rapper
I aint no writer, a poet, nor a rapper My bars dont have the right swagger Or cadence like a raptor But there r things I wanna capture See for you what I ll manufacture say u a dispatcher I wish I was a hacker So I can get in to your phone Spy in your home And see how you treat her Just for once, even for a minute, how you please her Is she a good kisser Does she tease you until you beg her? Hope she treats you well today Like a king, when you appear As you chase her down like a pray She ll obey and say My love, tell me where you wanna spray On your big day bet she ll celebrate But everyday she should appreciate Everything that you are and you offer You freaky dude with crazy banter You work hard to provide For yours and her child But if she s not gonna alleviate The stress you face everyday I am happy to negotiate For all the magic you and I can create..
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thank you for the feedback!!
Hi @proft.! Welcome to our feedback of 'not a rapper'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Good choice of beat! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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