Deep thoughts (not finished)
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Deep thoughts going in my young mind Hoping someone ask how I am Telling the truth don’t hurt Trying to live the future god gives Trying not to mess up Long life ahead But I want to end Only thing keeping me in this race is the memories Deep thoughts on the left side memories on the right side Fighting till the end of the line Dying won’t fix my sins Praying for a better day Praying for a better night But god won’t listen Crying all night Tears shed to nightmares Three word will bring me out Are you ok To afraid to tell anyone Just waiting for someone to ask If your ok
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Hey @q7josykscq! Thanks for sharing 'Deep thoughts (not finished)' with us! Your vocals are a good volume in the mix, but they're a little unclear, you may play around with your distance from the mic! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Awesome delivery, so many tight flows!! We think this track is awesome and could be a hit! Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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