rains 🌧

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rains 🌧

know life can get real crazy your feeling lost and hazy don't let your voice be lazy your voice is still amazing your spirit is so freeing a one of a kind human being this b******* you've been seeing crazy guilt you're carrying you're worrying it's blurrying your vision how bout a real admission so much that you're missing on a direct Collision lost your honest mission no room for intermission life is like a crazy maze passing are moments to days find the suns brightest rays optimism always pays pain will always wear you down but love is out there to be found in fact that shit is all around just lift your eyes up from the ground

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5 years ago

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5 years ago

Hey @ljaez! Thanks for sharing 'rains 🌧 ' with us! The rhyming is well put together. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! Nice meaning behind the track! Good choice of beat! The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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@ljaez nice frist track 💕

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