Hi @antwonebarnes!
Welcome to our feedback of 'So Greedy'!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track.
Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
Dope beat, really works for this track!
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
yo got a great timber but I'd like to hear more variation in the lyrics. overall a great track Keep it up bruh
Bars: 5/10
Delivery: 10/10
Impression: 9/10
Bars: Good 💛
Delivery: Perfect 💯
Impression: Dope 🔥
very good just try to get your voice in the background put together where your words can be heard and it would be perfect
Bars: 10/10
Delivery: 9/10
Impression: 10/10
Bars: Perfect 💯
Delivery: Dope 🔥
Impression: Perfect 💯
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#FAMILYSWYPE Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
@rapfame_ar_team it's basically a rough daft a idea I put together I didn't mean to publish I but I really thank y'all for the feed back.
Hi @antwonebarnes! Welcome to our feedback of 'So Greedy'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Dope beat, really works for this track! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
yo got a great timber but I'd like to hear more variation in the lyrics. overall a great track Keep it up bruh Bars: 5/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Good 💛 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
very good just try to get your voice in the background put together where your words can be heard and it would be perfect Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥