Yo @syrus9116!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'body shit everyday all day'!
Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that!
Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try improving your recording quality if you can.
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, nice choice.
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
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Yo @syrus9116! Waddup - let's take a look at 'body shit everyday all day'! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, nice choice. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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