Dior (22:30)

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Kill that man chase that clown shoot him beat him until he’s bleeding cryin on the floor begging for mumzy please help me I’m like no u stupid neek yo yo yo I’m on the opp block with my favourite blade chilling w t1 r1 and z sheffin every opp we see we make them cry we make them bleed we make them fall on the floor screaming for help please help me I’m like no u stupid neek I killed ur dad yesterday now I’m going for mumzy if u try save them I’ll make u bleed please trust me bc it’s true I will end ur life to mans not scared of any1

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Harri Wright

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5 years ago

Lil Joiner2.0

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Adamiyat iman

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Harri Wright

Author

5 years ago

@rapfame_ar_team thanks

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Yo @fz6b6mloab! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Dior (22:30)'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Good choice of beat! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

👌🩸GUNNHOE👌🩸💨📳🥊

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

GKnowledge/Onemanarmy905

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Trip chick

5 years ago

voice a little louder but damn Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

(E.B.E.) Dirty Gramps

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥