EastBound (22:37)
Taking time to myself till I'm me again okay Headed down the wrong path I've been in my old ways Think I lost my mind I can never seem to locate When I first started they considered me a no name Now I'm in the booth and I spit it like propane Made it from the bottom scraping pennies for a low wage Quit my 9-5 but I feel I made no gain Till I win the war up in my head I'm a slave (Ayy!?) You ain't gonna make it what they telling me I don't make friends, make a whole lotta enemies I don't got time for your lies or your jealousy Perfecting my craft all my moves planned carefully Flow so acidic like an alkaline battery Taking my dreams and I turn 'em to reality Actually it's happening, y'all so incompetent Standing for my rights, take a knee like I'm Kaepernick (Whoooh!) 2020, y'all so sensitive Can't take a joke or you might take offense to it Freedom of speech long gone out the window bitch Everyone's a politician everyone's a critic shit Listen up, you should self educate Cause your brain is a powerhouse shouldn't go to waste I'm about to levitate, David Blane won't settle I've been finding my groove, always pedal to the metal
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Hi @avig102507! Welcome to our feedback of 'EastBound (22:37)'! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The rhyming is well put together. We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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