life is hard

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life is hard

life is hard it's time to hit the pavement rapping so hard trying to get out of the basement mind is blank getting tired of these blank checks man I feel that I could ring the necks of those that bring disrespect man I got a feeling that it's time to hit the deck my mind state is being wrecked so many feelings going unchecked feel like I could blow up at anytime been putting in alot of overtime for this rap shit feel like I can hit up anyone and tell um to sit explosion s happening fuck it kamikaze

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5 years ago

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5 years ago

Hi dahill23! Welcome to our instant feedback of 'life is hard'! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! The recordin' quality is quite low, it would be great to clean it up, perhaps by being in a quieter place to record. Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done!! Thanks again for sharing, it was dope listening to your music! Share with us again for instant feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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