Passion (09:06)/Lie ...tonight

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am walking on this sight tonight thought it was quite site tonight thought it might shine bright tonight i really need some light tonight that it might shine so bright right that it might come to my side i really need some peace let me go get some sleep i just balanced on wall yeah i really don't wanna fall they gonna knock down i don't wanna go down she catch me when am about fall she help me a lot that dude he's knocking on ma door he forgot he called me a dog

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5 years ago

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Bo Jangles

5 years ago

Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

bjaydee333

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Ziplok

5 years ago

🔥🔥🏆🏆🏆🏆 Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Yo @tlhogiephraimletlhogonolo! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Passion (09:06)/Lie ...tonight'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

kzone

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

Dat Boy James

1 month ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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4 months ago

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SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

6 months ago

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