break up
baby lets have a conversation no confrontation meet me in the confrence dont keep me waiting cause i got something for you you haer that thumping its my heart jumping for you and i ant nothing without you i got you this gift for you so go on open it its a letter saying were threw im done im sorry but i had my fun hun please dont worry i loved the journey but the future was too blurry maybe it was too early but i loved it every second evry miniute my fealings lessened when you took the depressants i thought i was your preasant to make you feal happy it hurts because i wanna love you but you have no clue the shit i had to shovel you took fealings to shuffle be hurting my love muscle but itll be alright just look twoards the light and we'll be alright
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#upatnight Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hey @burgerbuddies69, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'break up'! ๐ฅ You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. ๐ The rhyming is well put together. โจ We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. ๐ Some super interesting melodic takes on this one! ๐ต Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. ๐ถLove the way you develop the flows with the beat! ๐ฅ Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! ๐ผ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! ๐ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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