break up

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baby lets have a conversation no confrontation meet me in the confrence dont keep me waiting cause i got something for you you haer that thumping its my heart jumping for you and i ant nothing without you i got you this gift for you so go on open it its a letter saying were threw im done im sorry but i had my fun hun please dont worry i loved the journey but the future was too blurry maybe it was too early but i loved it every second evry miniute my fealings lessened when you took the depressants i thought i was your preasant to make you feal happy it hurts because i wanna love you but you have no clue the shit i had to shovel you took fealings to shuffle be hurting my love muscle but itll be alright just look twoards the light and we'll be alright

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Coucy

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5 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @burgerbuddies69, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'break up'! 💥 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. 👍 Some super interesting melodic takes on this one! 🎵 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶Love the way you develop the flows with the beat! 🥁 Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

The 1 one

13 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

adogg7730

6 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Savage factz

4 years ago

#upatnight Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Adamiyat iman

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥