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I never had guidance can I hear something productive for once can I fall for love just for once why you people want to hate me can a man just make it with out the one trying to take shit can I ball can I chill I'm from a place where a bitch won't notice a bum they rooting for the don a low life nigga packing guns I really want to make it I still want to have fun I seen a lot envy should I stay or should I run its 20 21 and so many didn't make it haters still hating and the fakers still faking I wish for a change I need bigger funds I need a bigger room I need the latest car not trying to act like a star but something's feel amazing if people really show they have a heart if you really looking for the one dont act like Joan from girlfriends and be on the run we all make mistakes but dont leave and leave me for done strong people always make it but a nigga get tired and cant stay on the run we all looking for that special girl to put up with our stuff tell me do you love or is this just for lust

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6 years ago

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

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6 years ago

appreciate it @chef_success

@DVanteLee I feel u fam just keep grinding best thing u can do is have fun

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6 years ago

@chef_success keep a ear out might never know I might perfect it to where my numbers go up

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6 years ago

@chef_success much respect trust me I can go harder than all my songs I made on here but using this phone one this app make me feel like i gotta ease up so i can be heard ima work on my flaws

@DVanteLee I record with a fucked ass phone I've recorded with my free government phone n made a song quality enough for spotify.. u just got to learn to use bandlab properly. u got the potential tho fam

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6 years ago

@chef_success doing my music but I really do appreciate the advice

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6 years ago

@chef_success yeah everybody on here says the same I have potential I hate how my phone makes me sound like a amature and I have 11 yrs

@DVanteLee I understand I been there keep grinding fan

Author
6 years ago

@chef_success I know it's my phone not me but I working with what I have until I'm back in a studio

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potential u got.. needs work but nice

6 years ago

I gat you Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10

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6 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 9/10

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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10

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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

4 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

6 months ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

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