Yo akshenwon!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'Training Day'!
We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping!
Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recordin' closer to the mic to get a better sound! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place.
We think the delivery is dope, keep it up.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
#HENNIFREESTYLEQUEEN Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo akshenwon! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Training Day'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recordin' closer to the mic to get a better sound! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. We think the delivery is dope, keep it up. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥