I would suggest redo this track keep your lyrics dub up You lyrics + certain parts of your lyrics throw sound effects that matches your lyrics that always helps in a Storytelling track brings your track to life more if you don't like my advice f*** you...lol... if you happen to take my advice tag me in the finished product I would like to hear it
it sounds like you knew off the rip that this was a storytelling beat thats a good gift to have to know what to spit over a certain sounding Beat good call.. off the first listen the story style sound straight I'm going to listen again with my eyes closed to see if your story comes to life that's the best way to peep a Storytelling track for critiquing in my opinion
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Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 7/10
bars for hours. good bro check MY NEW
Nice track, I am feeling this flow all day. Nice style. Check me out if able
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nice track check me out when you get a chance
nice flow. crisp. You ever seen Choices pt 1 the movie by triple 6 mafia??
Clean flow!!!👏👏👏
i didnt see it down here lol,dope shit fam like the storytellin aspect ✌
Well constructed in vocals and effectively delivered in a manner of high prestige. Good job brotha FREE MINDS
classic one bro🔥🔥🔥 🆕🆕🆙🆙🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶✌✌✌
just now peepin u bro..good shit here 💯💯
Nice bro💯 if u have a chance check my new trac
i like this here
Love the storytelling style man! Gs! 🤘😈🤘
I would suggest redo this track keep your lyrics dub up You lyrics + certain parts of your lyrics throw sound effects that matches your lyrics that always helps in a Storytelling track brings your track to life more if you don't like my advice f*** you...lol... if you happen to take my advice tag me in the finished product I would like to hear it
Hit hit hit!!! @Cynful
it sounds like you knew off the rip that this was a storytelling beat thats a good gift to have to know what to spit over a certain sounding Beat good call.. off the first listen the story style sound straight I'm going to listen again with my eyes closed to see if your story comes to life that's the best way to peep a Storytelling track for critiquing in my opinion
nice storyline straight the f****** up
had nodding already u have a strong presence in your tone