i have so much to say but the words can't come out im so fucked up im bleeding and crying out
i have so much to say but the words can't come out im so fucked up im bleeding and crying out Stuck in a maze, thoughts trapped in the shadows, Echoes of pain, like whispers from gallows. Heart heavy, dreams buried in the marrow, Words on the tip, but they slip like arrows. Mind's a prison, with bars that confound, Silence so loud, it’s the loudest sound. In the depths, where the lost souls wander, Trying to speak, but my thoughts just squander. Glimmers of hope in the dark, they flicker, Fingers on keys, but the truth feels thicker. Voices inside, they clash and collide, Writing these lines, but I feel like I hide. Conversations with shadows, they know my plight, Yearning for daylight, but I’m stuck in the night. Dreams like smoke, they drift and they fade, Got so much to say, but the words feel delayed.
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