My love

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I met this dude thought nothing of it but then he became my everything and now i cant stop thinking if him Met this dude, just a glance, didn’t think much at first, But he sparked a little flame, now I’m lost in this thirst. Caught up in the vibe, like a dream on repeat, Heart racing fast, every time that we meet. Thought he was a phase, just a star in my night, But now he’s the sun, bringing warmth, shining bright. Every word that he speaks, feels like poetry flows, In a world of confusion, he’s the path that I chose. Late nights, lost in thought, replaying our chat, Every laugh, every smile, can’t believe where I’m at. Thought I knew my heart, but he rewrote the script, Now I’m tangled in feelings, can’t escape from this trip. Unraveled my defenses, pulled me into his dream, Thought it was just a spark, now it’s more like a beam. Can’t stop thinking 'bout him, he’s my muse, my escape, In this tapestry of love, he’s the thread I can’t shake.

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Eadlyn Pyles

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2 months ago

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Barry

2 months ago

keep grinding you got mad potential for real family

2 months ago

Mad respect, this track is straight fire, HEAT level through the roof! 🔥🚀 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

F.E.C ARSON

2 months ago

Needs a little more work Keep grinding ✊

Rap Fame A&R

2 months ago

Hey @eadlynpyles, We're gonna drop some tips for your track 'My love '. Let's get it! 1. Try using the rhyme generator to develop even more on your first rap! ✍️ 2. Some eye-catching cover art can draw new people to your music! 🎇 3. We think this track could use a little extra spice. Try out our vocal FX rack to give your track a little something extra. 4. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 5. This was too short to give you any proper feedback, can you drop something a bit longer? 6. There's a $1,000 prize pool in our weekly contests 🏆 Think you got what it takes? Try creating a track based on this week's theme! Submit more for feedback from us and community to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Meezy Fettachinni Dakaprio

27 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

$HINNO

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

steppajosh

2 months ago

Straight murder on the mic, each verse a crime scene! 🕵️‍♂️ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

The 1 one

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥