Second artist timing could be tighter. Maybe just more practice so it flows better. Sometimes it’s just about memorizing it so reading it doesn’t slow the emphasis on words. Great choice with collaboration choice. Not a fan of the book however it’s catchy. I think the auto was relied on too much for the hook. Hire a female or male singer to juice it up. Overall it’s decent and I listen to the whole thing.
Bars: Great 🎉
Delivery: On point 🎯
Impression: Great 🎉
good bars and got talent probably not your best but you absolutely don't suck at all you know what you doing the rap was fire
Bars: Perfect 💯
Delivery: Perfect 💯
Impression: Perfect 💯
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#ATW2026 Hook/ 1st verse 2nd Verse 3rd Verse Realistik Legitimate Merkury
Classic heat straight banger bro 👊🏼😎🔥
this track was fun asf thanks for having me it was fun to do and yall amazing g to work with
Second artist timing could be tighter. Maybe just more practice so it flows better. Sometimes it’s just about memorizing it so reading it doesn’t slow the emphasis on words. Great choice with collaboration choice. Not a fan of the book however it’s catchy. I think the auto was relied on too much for the hook. Hire a female or male singer to juice it up. Overall it’s decent and I listen to the whole thing. Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Great 🎉
Verses sharp as blades, slicing through the beat, no cap! 🗡️ I love ❤️ this your lyrics are fire 🔥💥🎤⭐️
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥 Nicely laced up Sick collaboration Tag This ⭐ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
real dope spitzz fam 💯🎯🌍🌟🎁🎨😤💨
this fire nice work yall came together dope 🔥💯🎶🎧
this is good work yaw 💪💪
good bars and got talent probably not your best but you absolutely don't suck at all you know what you doing the rap was fire Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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