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1.im in a tough position starring at the mirror wishing 2. I Hold the real me in my heart and wait recognition 3.but fuck it listen I can not give up .... 4.couple of hiccups..... .....I ask myself permission ......5.granted it ill do better ....don't like this life im living .....6. time do division double digit dollars im tired of money pinchin 7.i got 3 sons and no daughters three reason I oughta 8. stop treading this muddy water havnt been the greatest father 9. now its time to prosper 10. cant mend the relationship ...........if you dont even bother 11.if you fake ill separate you prolly always been a snake 12. strait to hell incinerate live your life that's what you make 13.only real shit on my roster .............better check your posture 14. im not simulated im the real that they all hated 15 got your bitch xradied both of us got to way faded 16.im just glad we never dated .........I hit it .......then re locaded 17. .......if she wit it ............I spit .,..........smacked it grabbed it .........then i did it 18....dropped her draws ........popped the bra ........yes I admit it 19.I ain't with no gimmicks i fuck her a couple minutes 20.got a nut handled business block her before she visits 21.cuz dumb bitches need stopped .....trying to tell me that im not everybit of honest im the truth ..........this is me honesty is all that I got .........plus this misery that cant knock me from the top knocking on my door please dont knock like a cop im paranoid forsure sleeps the only cure gotta stop and be mature to much time up on the clock every hour I endure sipping from a drink that stirred learning lessons vision blurred I know that I sound absurd words get slurred scrapping curbs
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