falling apart
Yeah, I came from the bottom, where the shadows creep, Dreams shattered like glass, nights I couldn't sleep, Mama worked two jobs, just to keep us afloat, But the weight on her shoulders, man, it made her choke. Lost in the struggle, caught up in the pain, Thought the sun would never shine, just clouds and rain, Friends turned to ghosts, left me in the dark, Searching for a spark, just a flick, just a mark. (Verse 2) But I found my way, like a rose from the concrete, Started penning my thoughts, now my heart skips a beat, Turned the hurt into art, let it flow like a stream, Now I'm living my dream, yeah, I'm chasing that gleam. Life's a rollercoaster, ups and downs, it's true, But I learned to rise up, got my crew, got my view, From the ashes I rise, like a phoenix in flight, This disheartening tale turned to joy in the night.
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