I've made the song longer, focusing on you've been struggling with addiction your whole life, and added a part where you

I've made the song longer, focusing on you've been struggling with addiction your whole life, and added a part where your mom's crying her eyes out saying "there's so much you could be and there's so much you could've been but you have never given up son": Verse 1: Been stuck in addiction my whole life, it's a mess Every time I try to change, it just breaks me down more and more Strugglin' to break free from this toxic bind But the drugs got me dead , they keep my plotting on casket Hook: "I'm sorry mama. I know you want me to change I said I'm sorry mama, but I feel like if I don't change I'm gonna die today" Verse 2: can’t open my eyes these demons are on my shoulders Killed my Angels Memories linger like shadows in the rain Tryna find my footing but this pain keeps on my chain Hook: "I'm sorry mama. I know you want me to change I said I'm sorry mama, but I feel like if I don't change I'm gonna die today" Verse 3: You worry 'bout me, watchin' me struggle hard Want to help me up but I'm losin' my guard I know you're hurtin', see it in your eyes Wish I could make it right before I lose the fight Mom's part (in a spoken part, crying): _"There's so much you could be and there's so much you could've been_ _But you have never given up son, you keep on fightin'_ _I see the pain in your eyes and it breaks my heart_ _I wanna help you son, but I don't know how to start"_ Hook: "I'm sorry mama. I know you want me to change I said I'm sorry mama, but I feel like if I don't change I'm gonna die today" Verse 4: Tryna rise up now, leave the pain behind Find my strength in you mama and the love you design Keep on fightin' through the struggle and the night Hopin' for a brighter day where love shines like a light Verse 5: Addiction's like a ghost, it's haunting me still Tryna exorcise the demons but they keep on the kill But I'll keep on strugglin', tryna find my way out Mama's prayers are with me, helpin' me through the doubt Hook: "I'm sorry mama. I know you want me to change I said I'm sorry mama, but I feel like if I don't change I'm gonna die today" This version's longer, focusing on a life of addiction, and includes your mom's emotional spoken part saying "there's so much you could be and there's so much you could've been but you have never given up son". How's that? Want me to tweak anything?