The Narkzul Crown A Goblin’s Gospel
Neon drips like venom, a city's cold breath, I was forged in the flicker, a prophet of death. They stepped over my face like static on screens, But I saw the skyline's jagged, gnawing teeth. The quest was a wound through dead malls and frost, A map on a glass shard of all that was lost. I tore down a fence with my bare, iron hands, And wrestled for a jewel in forgotten lands. I came to the mountains, teeth gnawing the sky, To a corpse of a kingdom where my reflection would die. We spoke not with words, but with knuckles and stone, And snow drank the blood where my rival was thrown. The crown cut my palms, a grim, obsidian crown, But the city's heart beat as my kingdom was found. Now black fires roar as the world kneels to me, Krix of the Iron Teeth, the king you will see.
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