my heart heavy bitch im stepping cold he talm da hot shi in real life he going fold drinking lean let the demons control
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my heart heavy bitch im stepping cold he talm da hot shi in real life he going fold drinking lean let the demons control took a perk n got in dha mode I dont talk ab my feelings I just wanna roll im shooting shi up dont get me in dha timing bullets everywhere going b flying yhu dnt kno dha feeling wen yhu see ya own mama crying hop in the car im first one sliding big bro told me im to young but I still gave me extra gun he said dont be no fool use diz bitch if a nigga act dumb Damm free avi
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