lil story
guns (Verse 1) Rollin' through the city, got my mind on the hustle, Guns in the trunk, yeah, we flexin' that muscle, Sippin' on gin, while the sun sets low, In the fast lane, baby, never movin' slow. Gotta watch my back, haters lurkin' in the dark, But I keep it real, always hittin' my mark, From the streets of Long Beach to the top of the game, Ain't no shame in my hustle, I’m just chasin' the fame. (Verse 2) Click-clack, bang-bang, it’s a life on the edge, With my crew rollin' deep, livin' life on a ledge, Guns like my words, they be shootin' for respect, In this concrete jungle, gotta earn your collect. Stayin' true to the code, never switchin' the lane, With the rhythm in my veins, feel the fire and the pain, Snoop D-O-double-G, yeah, you know the name, In this world full of chaos, I’m just playin' the game.
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First track and already dropping bombs! 💣💥 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Now that's what we're talking about @za2yfjjkbe, Nice job on your first track 'lil story'! 1. Don't rush - we know how exciting it can be to record your first track, but try to take your time to get the most out of the studio! 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 🌟 3. Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 4. Rap Fame defo has some powerful effects 🚀 Keep using 'em, but remember less can be more when it comes to the mixing stage! 5. This was too short to give you any proper feedback, can you drop something a bit longer? 6. Try entering one of our weekly contests for the chance at winning the $500 grand prize! 🥇 Try joining a crew to build with other artists, we hope you share your music with the Rap Fame Community again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Your verses are like a lyrical workout! The strength is in the persistence! 🎤💪