my swag
my family tree there a congregation of gangsters and gangster as well as know Thug's my niggas and I see now that there's roulez to this life style we living don't snitch on nobody no matter where you are I can see that's why Jesus Christ got crucified because they hated him for being righteous you know everyone in this world is not going to see heaven Brothers nowadays getting busted by their own Pierce daily while their mothers and grandmothers hearts be hurting put your billionaire child running wild in the city getting cater to and don't even know how to take it while people in Israel is praying for forgiveness trying to wait for a sign from heaven but they'll never get it please oh Lord don't let me die tonight before I can see my little girl raise up to be a will intelligent woman in this cold world that we living in with the criminal minded and praying and giving no forgiveness are these women and men waiting for the judgment Day and I wish I wasn't wasn't affiliated with the gangbaingers and houlombs so I can't turn my back as I walk down the corner secret related hideout just to get them a piece to try to come and capture me in my brain I try to maintain so I'm carrying a Gatling in the small of my back just in case I get attacked by a hater on my line because we don't see eye to eye I look in your eyes I see the fear on your face looking at me like you have sprayed with a can of Mace see I'm ready to die and then take them cowards with me and I'm getting high off of thug Life and I know the world won't forgive me living just like a Trojan or more like a soldier the world is unknown about people feelings the government raising taxes every time we buy different cars and houses trying to keep off the street walking like a heavy beast the world is an agony niggas and I'm hoping you can see it so some niggas are paranoid grabbing a pistols thinking everybody is trying to spy on them let me know the window are they eyes and yet they can see did the enemies trapped inside of them so we are going to fall for that mistakes stakes steaks takes breaks lakes mistakes takes aches
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