1st Studio Project Preview

A Portion of the Song .... My Studio Partner Advised to Show the Birth ,, Growth , and Maturity of the Songs I Create . So , Here is Just a Taste. ... and this Is Not the Beat for Actually Song .... Jus' Spittin' the Bar'z to a Random Beat I Haven't Heard Before after Writting this Verse .... Any and All Ideas & Feedback ... Positive or Negative .... I Will listen and Consider Any Advice if You Have to Share ... Thank You .